Tuesday, 1 November 2011

Rough Cut Feedback

Goodwin's Points
-Good use of visuals and lyrics
-Music and visuals
- Unclear Narrative
-No vocalist

-Good greenscreen/stop motion
-Good scrabble shot
-Good finger-thing
-Variety of shots
-Different locations
-Didn't get the wings flying
-Didn't understand it

Mise en Scene
-Wings stayed on throughout video.
-Normal clothes shows regular girl
-Sunny day, bright, pure, pretty.
-Streets names = Heaven

-Continuity editing
-Steady, neutral pace
-Basic cut transitions
-Stopframe placement is a bit random.


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