Goodwin's Points
-Good use of visuals and lyrics
-Voyeurism
-Music and visuals
- Unclear Narrative
-No vocalist
Camerawork
-Good greenscreen/stop motion
-Good scrabble shot
-Good finger-thing
-Variety of shots
-Different locations
-Didn't get the wings flying
-Didn't understand it
Mise en Scene
-Wings stayed on throughout video.
-Normal clothes shows regular girl
-Sunny day, bright, pure, pretty.
-Streets names = Heaven
Editing
-Continuity editing
-Steady, neutral pace
-Basic cut transitions
-Stopframe placement is a bit random.
Creativity
Tuesday, 1 November 2011
Rough Cut Feedback
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Alistair McGreavy,
Holly Hibbett,
Michaela Farr
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